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Mia –
Shipping took only 13 days. Quality very good, nice secured packing I’m satisfied.Good product
Amelia –
I quality is good. Cute and lovely. Price worthy and nice attachments too. And shipment came very early. Thank you
Harper –
Muy buenos productos, llegaron en tan solo 24 dias 😀 Muchas gracias al vendedor, pediré nuevamente
Evelyn –
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